hello,
I would like to present a new WIP of a weapon I'm making.
It's name used to be an abbreviation of side-loading AR, but I derailed a bit from that plan
The stock is collapsible
here are some pictures:

and again, sorry for the bad renders
I know that there are some errors in the mesh and I'm fixing them.

Well, you should post higher resolution 90° angle shots of the fixed version of the weapon for us to judge.. otherwise how would you expect us to see anything through those pics you posted ?

You mean, something in this resolution:

The small size of the renders is because I'm using XSI mod tool, The above pic is just a printscreen i took

It's looking good so far, that's the low poly, right? Laser illuminator attachment could be a bit bigger maybe.

Yeah, looks cool now, proportions look just fine, though I haven't searched any comparative screen, guess you know what you're doing !

I haven't looked for any reference pictures, I guess you did that already... but the stock seems short and front grip handle seems thinner, comparing to the rest of the rifle.

Overall, looks good for now. Keep it up!